Tiki's scribblings

Looks like LJ is gonna be down again until 6:30, just like yesterday.

For what it's worth, I think you pulled the implied N/C off very well. The whispering in the ear gives the scene just the right amount of sexual tension. You can tell there's something there, but it doesn't come on too strong. A good balance.

As for the main character, I thought it was going to be a total gender neutral character, until it was mentioned that it was a she. I like the fact that she either knows nothing about the band members at all, or she's fairly irreverent about the whole thing. (Snakes and Ladders)

She tore up the check. Balls of brass, that one. :)